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November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
>.< I lurv it! I can't wait for more.
-Hoshi
-Hoshi
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November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! Everytime I get on adultfanfiction I always look for more progress on this story. If there isnt any Im so disappointed and if there is I get ridiculously excited. I think you have really captured the boys attitudes and tendencies very nicely. I am looking forward to reading more of this story!
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November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Really enjoyable.
Real quick; you go from past tense, to present tense, back to past tense a lot. It interupts the flow of the story. I can help you with that if you want.
Real quick; you go from past tense, to present tense, back to past tense a lot. It interupts the flow of the story. I can help you with that if you want.
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November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are a God.
This is amazing and it's weird because i was just going to reread it before beddies and I saw you had updated and I squealed and my mom heard and I was like, "MORE WINCEST!" and she was like, "YAY ME NEXT".
Yeah. You got two fans here in little ass Quitman, GA.
I'm rambling but it's a good thing.
This is amazing and it's weird because i was just going to reread it before beddies and I saw you had updated and I squealed and my mom heard and I was like, "MORE WINCEST!" and she was like, "YAY ME NEXT".
Yeah. You got two fans here in little ass Quitman, GA.
I'm rambling but it's a good thing.
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October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love Sam & Dean. Loved the backseat of the car. Just one thing, pretty please? Shutter - the things that hang on either side of windows. Shudder -- what the boys were doing in ecstasy!
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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I luv u! keep it up <3 you just made my day *but check the spelling for some things ;) *
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September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooh this is getting interesting. hope they'll never find lust or a cure xD
can't wait for the next chapter^^
and good luck with the weather!
can't wait for the next chapter^^
and good luck with the weather!
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September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There are a couple of words that are not correct. "soar" should be "sore. "Their" (in the first chap, I think" needs to be "they're". Other than that, I really enjoyed the story. Very hot.
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August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome u picked up the story again ^^
well for the next chapter, how about a prequel of sam's side when dean is in the shower before you go further to the pouncing part? =3
well for the next chapter, how about a prequel of sam's side when dean is in the shower before you go further to the pouncing part? =3
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August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I would love to beta for you if you want. Shoot me an email and let me know.