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Ummmm, I don't know if this'll work because I've never actually reviewed anything on this site, so I hope you get this.

I would definitely love it if you were to continue this story, because I love it and I definitely think you got the characters of Sam and Dean down right. And I have no idea where this story is going and I actually do want to find out because I love the storyline too.

I imagine this probably is one of the crappier reviews you've ever gotten, but I just wanted to fire this off quickly. So sorry for the brief, completely suckish, lacking any kind of detail review.

I like it so far. There are some rough parts grammatically and structurally that could easily be remedied with a good beta reader, but the story is good and the character voices are accurate - one of the main things I look for in fan fiction. I am only on Chapter 4 but it is holding my interest and I am looking forward to reading more. I will review again later. Let me know if you need any help...

I actully think that your story and writting is very good and believable. I could see it being a supernatural episode (the part that I'm at anyway) or one of the books you could buy. Good job.

If i had found this story sooner i would have def reviewed!!! I really like it!! The odd thing is that the twins remind me of me and my sister, except in reverse (she's older and like Audrey and i'm younger and more like Nicolet). I like how you are building the story and how you are drawing out the connections of the sisters' to the demon...pls keep writing???

Excellent story so far. Keep it up.