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July 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I wish the 2 couples did end up together rather than a one night stand.
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September 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Im really enjoying your story. The plot is not complicated and the characters behave in character. I like the original characters you've created as well. They are likable and believable. It's a nice mix of case and attraction so far. I really love the dialogue. Some of it cracks me up! Thanks for writing and posting.
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September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like the titles of your chapters. Also I'm finding the language/dialogue of the show characters to be in character and fun. They feel very authentic. Thanks for continuing the story and posting.
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December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the story hope you have more updates coming soon cause I can't wait. Will the guys be hooking up with the twins?
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July 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is so very good! I think you are capturing the boys' personalities pretty well for your first story. I hope your hiatus does not last too much longer. ;p
~Dark
~Dark
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January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it! You capture Sam and Dean's voices and mannerisms quite well. It reads very much like watching the show. Would love to meet Nicki and Audrey!
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July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying the story. Like the characters. Sam and Dean you use remind me of Season 1 & 2 Sam and Dean. Little trouble reading because whatever word processing software you're using, the computer commands are showing up as well.
Nice to get back to the earlier personalities of the boys. Your monster sounds interesting too and I like that tgere is a possible love hookup for both boys. Sam gets neglected a lot in that department.
I'm currently suspicious of Valerie, but nice that you have several suspicious characters to keep one guessing.
Overall, very enjoyable. I read on.
Nice to get back to the earlier personalities of the boys. Your monster sounds interesting too and I like that tgere is a possible love hookup for both boys. Sam gets neglected a lot in that department.
I'm currently suspicious of Valerie, but nice that you have several suspicious characters to keep one guessing.
Overall, very enjoyable. I read on.
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July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just finished all 16 chapters you have up so far. Really, really enjoying it. Would make a great episode. Will be watching for the next installment.
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March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweet jesus, it can't stop there. I've just found this story and 16 chapters later I am spell bound. You have to finish this story. It's like an episode on tv when it stops on a cliff hanger and you scream nooooooo at the tv. I will give you a cookie, anything, just please don't abandon this. It's wonderful, great story, everyone in character, and Sam (Huge Sam fan) just has to get that kiss. lol. Love it.
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January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I really hope you continue and eventually finish it. Love Niki and Audrey, they matchup nicely with Sam and Dean.