rate_review Reviews

NIcely done. Simple direct and smuttily hot. Just watch some of your grammar. But, we all make those kinds of errors. Keep Writing.

Okay? Naaah... That was pretty good. Hot, descriptive and well-paced. One or two minor grammaticals, but over all a GREAT JOB.

Lovely! Will Clark figure it out? Potential for a follow-up chapter there perhaps? Will keep my eyes open in case you do decide to write any sort of sequel... Nice piece, and thanks. 'Purr

I've gotten locked into such a habit of reading Smallville slash that I've hardly touched any het fic in this fandom, but I love this one. Lois on the show looks awesome in his shirts, so that image made me smile and nod. I love his intrusion and how he's just his usual sunny, slightly naive self. I was almost as disappointed as she was! And the last line was hysterical! Great work.

More than OK. Great job. Good descriptions and prose with a nice set up and pace.
A few gramaticals and missing words, but they don't distract and as a fellow writer... they happen, but happen less the more you write.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading them.