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March 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful! I can't wait for more.
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August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
HEY! Wtf!! You at least finished the story on FF.net!! Srsly I started re-reading FOR The Epcest!! PLlleasssssseeeeeeeeeee finish posting it D: WaahH!!
Mah email is mrshyrockstar@gmail.com
Mah email is mrshyrockstar@gmail.com
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July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
okay, i'm kind of really sad this is being left incomplete (as according to the ff.net version i read). one thing really jumped out at me that i would love to see explored: Larry being a sperm donor for Charlie. would you be at all offended if i took and possibly reworked the scenes this is mentioned in and find a way to work it into something else (i would, of course, credit the inspiration and anything directly quoted to you and/or your ff.net account)? i'll also comment on the ff.net, so you can more easily respond to my question/request.
if you ever decide to expand or continue this, i would be happy to see more and would love to get an email at authress16@ yahoo.com if you do.~
if you ever decide to expand or continue this, i would be happy to see more and would love to get an email at authress16@ yahoo.com if you do.~
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! Please update soon, I want to find out what happens next.
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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I have already read the original version but I like this one too!! It's just awesome and I can't wait for seeing what happened next with Colby, Ian and Amit. Charlotte has a nice fanclub!! :)
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June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can’t believe that you have rewritten your wonderful story, to include the incest angle! Wow I am so happy to read this.
So you decided the feeling was mutual, which is so cool. I was thinking maybe it was a one sided Don thing.
I am so curious to see if you have Don and Charlie paring up with other people. It would be one way to try to fight the growing attraction. Poor Ian and Amit, I have a feeling they are going to be used badly.
Did Don fallow Charlie to her last meeting with Ian? After finding out she had a lover, that was unwilling to make a commitment, I think he would be dieing to find out more (aka jalousie). I think Don would follow Charlie. That way Don would know where go, to if she is missing.
Thanks for sharing your story, and please post it with the original one at the other site. I think it would be super cool. That way more people can fallow the two stories, I know I will. And it would make getting updates much easier.
I would love to get any updates at: sentineljandb@yahoo.com
So you decided the feeling was mutual, which is so cool. I was thinking maybe it was a one sided Don thing.
I am so curious to see if you have Don and Charlie paring up with other people. It would be one way to try to fight the growing attraction. Poor Ian and Amit, I have a feeling they are going to be used badly.
Did Don fallow Charlie to her last meeting with Ian? After finding out she had a lover, that was unwilling to make a commitment, I think he would be dieing to find out more (aka jalousie). I think Don would follow Charlie. That way Don would know where go, to if she is missing.
Thanks for sharing your story, and please post it with the original one at the other site. I think it would be super cool. That way more people can fallow the two stories, I know I will. And it would make getting updates much easier.
I would love to get any updates at: sentineljandb@yahoo.com
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Just wanted to say that I read the original version of this, and not realising this version was different, wouldn't have read this except I decided to read the fic again. Am so glad I did-Normally incest squicks me, but for some reason, I'm really liking this story. Hope to see both versions updated soon!