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for What's my name?

by neuropsyche01

person Midknight
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well-written and described. In short "HOT!!" The only thing I would have liked was a little context, the how they got there and where they were.
person Debs
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh nice short and sweet and HOT!!!! Love it can't wait for more.
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good show. Would have been nice to get a bit of a setup as to how they got where they were, but good, smutty hot descriptive writing and mood creation. Keep at it. I would like to read more.
person castlelover
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hope you continue it was super sexy and hot!!