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by Nik

schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just finished chapter six and I am blown away. I couldn't stop reading after I had left the review of the first chapter. I know that you were worried about Puck being out of character, but the only thing that seemed out of character with him, would have been hooking up with Kurt in the first place. But, isn't that why you write, and I have read this story to begin with? I could totally see Puck dealing with all of these situations the way you wrote him as being a part of the character that he is on the show. I know some people might be put off by the use of the supernatural, but I found it to be a very entertaining device that helped to mold the focus of the story. It took the place of the music on the show. This is only the third fan fiction that I have read, so please excuse me if this review isn't standard. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Keep up the good work.
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great job. I love the way Puck is so nervous he is going to do the wrong thing. You write it perfectly.