I just wanted to let you know that I read all of this and thoroughly enjoyed it. Great solid plotting and really lovely character arcs. I liked the way you gave the scene blocking and camera angles. I could see it all in my head really well.
I've been watching some episodes of the show recently and was intrigued by the interaction between Kobick and Burton, so I went looking. It turned out this was just exactly what I wanted. (I think the "I said NO flamethrowers next to the buildings" scene is my favorite.)
3-11 here is a repeat of 3-1, but I found it elsewhere online.
I just wanted to let you know that I read all of this and thoroughly enjoyed it. Great solid plotting and really lovely character arcs. I liked the way you gave the scene blocking and camera angles. I could see it all in my head really well.
I've been watching some episodes of the show recently and was intrigued by the interaction between Kobick and Burton, so I went looking. It turned out this was just exactly what I wanted. (I think the "I said NO flamethrowers next to the buildings" scene is my favorite.)
3-11 here is a repeat of 3-1, but I found it elsewhere online.