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for Winchester's Winter

by Hnoss

schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well this seems interesting to say the least
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, I never really know what to say in these...
Ok.
I'm really looking forward to read the rest of this story. I'm really curious to see where it will lead.

I think that Winter is an interesting character, you've managed to make him very visual and very credible.
I'm blown away by the detail in and the interesting way you portray the old Celtic goddesses. It's great to see that you have great respect for the ancient goddesses, and you're not portraying them in a negative light. (Despite how much I love the show, that's one of my great pet peeves with Supernatural, the negative way they portray the ancient heathen gods.)
Your grammar and style are great as well, no glaring mistakes, and the language is very good. You make the story come to life, it is so visual and easy to imagine.

I'm hoping that you will continue this story, because I for one can't wait for the next chapter. I will definitely keep reading.