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for Within Your Heart

by yukiorkyo

schedule March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was skeptical at first, when I saw this was based off of my favorite story. I have read many other 'Beauty and the Beast' based stories and was thoroughly disappointed with nearly every single one, but I was mightily surprised at how well this was written. Once I started reading, I was unable to stop until the very end. You did very well in following the Disney story, but adapting it to the Merlin characters and making it for adults without making it crass. I very much delighted in reading this story. Thank you very much for writing it.
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how you combined the two fandoms in such a fascinating way. I absolutely love this fic.
Thank you so much for writing it. :D
person TeeHee
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING MOST EPIC MERLIN STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!
I loved how you made the characters. The story wasn't too fast or too slow, It actually went along with the storyline from beauty in the beast. It was totally a page turner... or a mouse clicker... you know what I mean.

sigh... so epic I wish I could read it again for the 1st time. I dont usually find good Merlin storys that I like and after this one I'm afraid my expectations of Merlin fanfics will be horrably high.

I dont think i'm ever gonna forget this awesome version of the story and I will definatly be telling all my yaoi loving friends about this tomorrow
person Safir84
schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story you’ve got here, I really liked it! And it was my first “Beauty and the Beast” crossover story too (as well as Merlin crossover), which you did an awesome job on, kudos! The plot’s was great and so were the character portrayal and character interaction too, of course! Everything was also well written and the smut was very nicely described, not to mention pretty damn hot as well, kudos again, hehe!
person Jess's Cadaver
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!!! It's been almost a month since you last updated... but I wanted to let you know that I have faith in you and I still check regularly to see if you've added a new chapter. ^_^ I love this fic and I can't wait for more. Thank you sooooo much! *BIGHUG*
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
next chapter please!!! this is good.
person LoveLee
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!!! Beauty and the Beast meets Merlin a delicious combination.
person Jess's Cadaver
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh! fabulous! poor arthur! but it will be ok because merlin will return and declare his LOVE!! ahhH!!!! ^_^ and poor merlin! getting kicked around like that. Uther will pay! muahahahaha. i love it! you're really amazing! i can't believe how perfectly you've melded Merlin with Beauty and the Beast, THANK YOU! *HUG* I can't wait for the continuation!
person Jess's Cadaver
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh!!!! omg hot. hahahaha. wow. I mean... who knew anyone could write sort-of bestiality so freakin well?! it wasn't even weird, it was perfect! thank you so much! i love this chapter. :) I am now desperately waiting for merlin and auther to admit their love and break the curse!!!!! after auther defends merlin from uther... obviously... haha. THANK YOU SO MUCH! you're amazing. *hug*
person liljanie
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haven't seen this one earlier. Shame on me. I'm having so much fuin with it (going to read the third chapter after I leave this comment). I'm enjoying it so, so much. Thank you for this beautiful written piece :)