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for Denial Makes Bad Bedfellows

by nocturneequuis

person Jermaina
schedule December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is such a cool idea - why is it so short? :(
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha I love McCoy and his "I'm a doctor" comment ... hahah
person Leialani
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Spock on the submissive side for a change, but still spouting logic, lol. I'd like to see more stories of Spock taking it instead of giving it.

You have anymore Spock/submissive stories? I wrote one but I have not submitted it yet(and it's a threesome also, but not with McCoy). I'm still fleshing it out...

Would love to see more of those three...

T'laina
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot, and hilariously in-character =)
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very cute, and the dialogue is so spot on--I could hear them saying every line! (The Shatner-ian punctuation was a nice touch.) Not to mention it made me laugh, which is always a plus. After all, how serious is Star Trek, really?

A couple of punctuation issues, but that's my only real quibble; I'd love to see more from you, if this is any indication of your usual work.