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by keithcompany

schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I am a fan of Star Trek. Not a total Trekkie nerd but still one that is able to understand (barely) part of that universe. If it's one thing I love about adultfanfiction is the (un)usual exotic situations but what I value more is how those characters got into those said circumstances. I liked this story a lot considering the story built up to the sexual encounter instead of just plopping us, the few audience who have read the story, into the action. It is a rare find on this site and must be announced so. I hope you do continue to create such stories because if anything, a story, by my standards, is more important and treasured than the lemon unless it is woven into the story correctly. And that is exactly what you did and so for this effort, a 5 is handed to you (the first for this one I think). So, good luck and update soon!

-Skycrawler00
person Haidyss84
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"So there," I love that when she took the time to prove a hypothetical coment that Archor might have made in that situation. Even if it isn't logical. A Valcon shouldn't care. Showing how she has slowly taken on human habits lol.