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for The Enterprise Parasite

by codysaoyrn

schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi and thanks for your review and rec on my story!
I have to admit, tentacle porn isn't really my thing. Also, the parasite attack also didn't seem quite logical - why would the parasite just suddenly die if it lived off sexual arousal and pleasure? Couldn't they have defeated it somehow instead? What about the afterveffects of the parasite's slime still left in their bodies, could be an interesting scenario to see what they would do to each other then, with no restraining tentacles to blame...
Nevertheless, I read all 11 chapters and it was a fun story to read, as much in character as one could expect from basically one long alien-tentacles-made-me-do-it sex scene. I prefer the sex with a little more personal chemistry and a little less tentacles involved, but that's just me...
person Nasyki
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
;______; Sorry I couldn't review sooner. I got in a car accident and the repercussions have kept me busy. I promise I'll respond to your email soon! Anyway, awwww. Poor Spock. I feel bad for him that Kirk doesn't remember. Though it should make it more interesting should he decide to pursue the captain. Eh? Lol. It's sooooo sad that this story is over, but that gives me ample time to continue onto what you have in the next fanfic. Wooooo!

~Nasyki Loves you~! <3
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An amazing story from beginning to end! I thought it couldn't get any better than a hard-and-horny Chekov, but by God it certainly did! You have a real talent, and I certainly shall be reading the sequel.

May I ask thouhh, whether or not Chekov remembers anything? What about his experience in the medi-room?

Yours,
person yorkpattie
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've loved reading through this whole story. You writing is extremely detailed and the story was great. (Definatly including the smut. XD) I look forward to reading the sequel!
person cyanidelolipop
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story cant wait to read more about it! I check constantly!
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no...I hope he didnt forget. I want them to get together!
person Nasyki
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooo! That's an aweful place to leave it off at! God this is getting good though. I swear this fic really answers every kink. I liked the little bit of dub-con on Kirk's reaction to the participation of McCoy, it's 3sum even. I can't wait until this is all over to find out Spock's reaction to Kirk's declaration though. That is going to be awesome. I almost hope it is a negative reaction because everyone loves a good angsting Kirk. Please update soon. I love this story.

Nasyki loves you!

::Sorry it took so long to see you had updated. My computer has been down for just over a week. I just got it back up::
person Nasyki
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES~! I Freaking love this story. First tentacles, now fisting, and it looks like there is going to be some 3sum action. XD This story is the smex. <3 Please update soon!

~Nasyki LOVES you and this stroy. :drool:
person Nasyki
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fudge. It cut my last review short. I HATE when that happens. I can't remember what it cut out either. Anyway, this story is addictive. Please update soon so I can be even happier.

~Nasyki LOVES you and this stroy. :drool:
person Nasyki
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fuck yes. I am such a pervert for tentcle action. But I have such a love for it, it can't be helped. This is only the second tentcle fic I have seen for this couple with tentacles. It made me very happy. Especially considdering this was WAY better than the last one I read. Gods I love this fanfic. You must continue. I heart S/K almost as much as tentacles. And you ended it at such a horrid part. It makes me really want to finish the one I started awhile ago. MOAR please! I needs to seeeee this completed.

~Nasyki-loves you so much right now. You don't even KNOW.