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for Heartbreak Pity

by CandyCaner

schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way you wrote Prue and Piper in this story, especially at the end when it could have turned overtly sentimental, but you kept it believable to the characters. I think the starting point that you chose for your story is one of the cutest Piper/Prue moments in the series. You asked for plot suggestions, and I have a couple: Piper and Prue lived together before the series started, and Prue was engaged to Roger. Why not go off that premise and have them discovering they have feelings for one another? Or if you want a one shot type suggestion, what about the time when Piper died because of the infected fruit and Leo saved her against the Elders orders? Prue and Piper could realize that they love each other because Piper almost died. Again, that was a cool story. I hope you become inspired to write another.
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story, you should continue making Prue/Piper stories.
person CharmedOneForever
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! So hot! I don't normally like Prue and Piper pairings but that was really good :D
person luvsyafiction
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Every time I see that scene now I'm going to think about this. I was actually going to say in the last review that I like it better when someone other then Prue is "in charge" or taking control of the situation. Turns out I didn't even have to say it, lol. Really Great just like I knew it would be!