rate_review Reviews

I love that you are updating this fic more frequently. I wish you would do an update every week. It's that good! I hope you eventually move into doing double penetration as the next level of degradation. A devil's threesome is needed in this fic. It is the best smutfic on the net

Great! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please hurry.

On a side note, have you thought about writing s slash Rizzoli & Isles fic? I would love to see how you would write that. :)

The introduction of Kate is the best ides ever! Just love older and fuller women slowly introducing younger girls into the deep sensual pleasure of lesbian sex... It's incredibly hot...! It's also so hot when Chuck joins in after a while....! I hope he will be even more involved next time... Him and Kate... Yum! Jenny constantly serving "her master" by giving him amazing blow jobs is sooooo so erotic as well. I just love their dynamic where he is the very dominant alpha male and she's the submissive - but still opinionated and fiery - reluctant "sex slave". It's amazingly hot. The only thing making this thing even hotter would be them engaging in hot and sweaty anal sex for a whole night and also finally introducing some male on male... Wow... That would seriously make this the most perfect erotic fic of all time....:P

This continues to be amazing. The fact Jenny (unwillingly) starts to be turned on by thoughts of Chuck/the things he does to her now is so hot. Cannot wait to see what Kate has in mind! I hope Chuck is in on it.

hoooootttttt!!! please update soon!!

A really good update. Please post more soon.

OMG!! this blows my mind Chuck is the man please have some anal in the next chapter please

This is seriosuly the best erotic fic I've ever read. The dynamic between Jenny/Chuck is simply fantastic. He forces her (seduces her) to do all these "degrading" things but slowly but very reluctantly she's learning to enjoy it.... Love that he is clearly the dominant party in their relationship. The descriptions of the BJ's + anal play are amazing! The girl on girl scene were completely haaawt. More of that please! :-)

Please update!

Please Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

I like the story, very much, for just one moment I really thought he was going to include the dog, I almost got out of here! Not really into that. But the lesbian scene was pretty hot, and I'm actually seeing and improvement in Chuck, I thought he was going to fuck kate too, I mean, he did kiss her. Never thought I'd like this couple, but they make a great contradiction. I'm more anxious to know what will happen between them, than the sex scene if I'm honest. Hope the next chapter comes really really quick.