rate_review Reviews

I'll be keeping an eye on this story. I must say I am impressed with it so far. You have done a very good job conveying the scenes and actions, making things enjoyable.

The story, such as it currently is, is good, the smut is highly erotic, and the potential for continuation is excellent. All in all, an superb continuation. I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.

absolutely awesome, i´m already looking forward to the next chapter! what amazes me is how much in character cam is, one moment sounding clearly like the programmed machine she is, the next sensual, like from a soap opera - or a porn movie (did she maybe watch some TV to 'recherche' for this special mission?) another interesting aspect - beside the great smut, of course ;-) is john´s bad conscious in combination with her slightly of behavior...is he imagining things due to his guilty feelings of using her+ doing it with a machine, or is a part of her computer-chip brain really enjoying their activities? its hard to tell if she´s so eager because she wants 'it' or because she wants to accomplish her mission...i guess only time - and many, MANY more chapters - can tell ;-)

It begged for continuation and continued it is. Quite happy to see a sequel to Birthday and looking forward to more. I'm still not fully used to the formatting used (such as not enough separating two speakers into two different paragraphs,) but that's only a minor quibble. Anxious for more.