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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you keep writing, I'll keep reading, this ranks up there with some of the best stuff I've seen come out of this site
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must admit, it's good.
well written
the way you writing it, it will soon no longer be a PWP !
What's going on Cameron's "mind" ?
What consequences will this "relation" have ?
Keep on giving us .
and... will he assault that nice ass of her ?
I rated you +++++
(please forgive any mistake I could make, I'm french....)
well written
the way you writing it, it will soon no longer be a PWP !
What's going on Cameron's "mind" ?
What consequences will this "relation" have ?
Keep on giving us .
and... will he assault that nice ass of her ?
I rated you +++++
(please forgive any mistake I could make, I'm french....)
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
its getting more and more interesting....and your smut definitely deserves the predicate 'addictive' LOLOL btw, how will he explain the ruined tiles? XD
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy to see that you decided to write this companion fic, which I really liked! It's quite well written, I noticed that you switched tenses in chapter 2 (only a little that is), so don't worry! The character portrayal was good, but a little off sometimes, Cameron sounded a lot like a school teacher at times, oh well! The smut was great though, but was way outdrawn, prolounged I mean!
Anyway, I cannot wait to see what happens next, so please update soon...
Anyway, I cannot wait to see what happens next, so please update soon...
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I simply love this story. Please don't stop. It is nice to see this side of Cameron. Keep up the good work!
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
John's performance was well above satisfactory and the chapter was well beyond excellent.
The descriptions are occasionally a bit too clinical, however that aside, the story is superb. Look forward to the next update.
The descriptions are occasionally a bit too clinical, however that aside, the story is superb. Look forward to the next update.
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far.I would love to see Sarah added into the mix though.
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well beyond satisfactory, indeed...oh dear! i hope sarah+derek have to go on such research trips more often LOLOL and that no one notices the stains in john's bedding XD it would be mightily embarrassing to explain this little side mission.... i wonder with what 'lesson' cameron will come up next....'google cunilingus' my ass!!
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit I like this series you started, I hope to see more sooner than the month and a half it took for you to write and post this update.
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can't wait for the next Three's More Than Company.