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for The Gift That Keeps On Giving

by SpecialFX

person Haidyss84
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is a hell of a way to releave stress. It is possible that she made up the mission. She may have been showering to act normal and when she was washing herself she realized how good it felt and then she cam up with the idea of the mission. even if that is true though I would argue.
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story, sexy. Hope to see more and some exploration of Camerons feeling for John. Now that the show is canceled it would be nice to get some version of resolution for that.
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person Cindy
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Despite the fact that the show is canceled, I hope you continue to update it. I love that John is so confused. I would love to maybe see his mother find out or if he starts to date another girl if Cameron gets jealous.
person peyaluna
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome lemon as always, yet i´m almost more intrigued by johns understandable confusion about camerons non-machine-like behavior....just what the heck is her agenda? or is she developing human characteristics without noticing herself? no, not bloody likely, yet....sheesh, i´m about as confused as john! LOLOL i hope you´ll answer these questions before ending this series - not that i want you to stop anytime soon ;-)
person moviefan
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, very nice. There's not enough John/Cameron stories. This is a good one.
person Nordanvinden
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, which I liked! Well written most of the time, but again, you had some switching of tenses, especially in John's thoughts! Just thought that it was a bit weird, oh well...

The smut was pretty great though, so they'd anal sex, huh, interesting, I guess! Cannot wait to see what's going to happen next, so please update soon...

person Anon
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!! I love this story but I'm sad that the show is essentially canceled
person mcw14830
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hope you continue to write this story and "flesh" it out even more. There are so many interesting twists and turns that could develop. And so many interesting pairings as well!

person Nordanvinden
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, so Cameron hasn't climaxed before now, okay, but now she did, nice, lol! Well, for her and him too! Wondering what's going to happen next, so please write more!
person Cindy
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omigod! Please update. This is a great story and I don't even watch the show. But maybe he could go to her "naughty place" next? :)