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March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story, and beautiful writing. Hope you'll update this.
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February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You've done a great job with the characters. If she is an infiltrator unit as said wouldn't you think she would have functional reproductive organs too, like for deep cover infiltration missions?
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January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter for this story. keep going!
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January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So glad you've updated this.
I've recently written a few new stories as well.
HAPPY NEW YEAR buddy!!!
I've recently written a few new stories as well.
HAPPY NEW YEAR buddy!!!
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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great to see you back. This is a great tale, and I'm glad you didn't abandon it.
I love the way you made the smut a way for Cameron to develop her mind. Smut just for the sake of it is nice sometimes, but here there's more, and I really enjoy it.
My only two issues would be your odd way of mingling dialogue with narrative and the fact that John can be such a douche as to even consider Riley, but oh well, we are but human.
In spite of that, I really enjoy the dirty adventures of Jameron you write. Please continue as soon as possible.
I love the way you made the smut a way for Cameron to develop her mind. Smut just for the sake of it is nice sometimes, but here there's more, and I really enjoy it.
My only two issues would be your odd way of mingling dialogue with narrative and the fact that John can be such a douche as to even consider Riley, but oh well, we are but human.
In spite of that, I really enjoy the dirty adventures of Jameron you write. Please continue as soon as possible.
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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the story moves on and now Riley is in the mix. Was hoping that you would move the John/Cam story out of the house and into other places. Great hot story and not Riley is here great work.
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September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7&8 are awesome stuff. Jon's thought processes are interesting and the sex is hot and well written, Just a minor nitpick: The Terminators in T:SCC are T-888s not T900s. Aside from Cameron which is an 'unknown cyborg' according to one enemy's HUD.
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September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter with equally great character interaction, and yet again everything’s well written and the smut is also very nicely described, kudos! Wonder what’s going to happen next? Therefore update soon…
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July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is probably one of my favorite stories on this site, I'm always happy to see when you update this and all your other stories. MOAR! :-)
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May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've read allot of hot stories over the years man. Some on this very site but yours is the very best. Thanks for keeping this gem going! ;) Oh, yeah. I suck at reviewing sorry. Hehe