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July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please write more for this story i loved it and i want to read more of it, keep up the awwespke work. ^_^
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April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLZ UPD8 I WANNA NO WAT HAPPNS NEXT! TH 4MAT OF TH STORY IS WONDERFUL! CONTINUE ON PLZ!
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The chapters are a too short and you skip from one scene to another very quickly (one minute its '3 days later' then it's '2 weeks later'). if you fleshed out the story more and described what happened during the little time skips, it would give the story more continuity, instead of making it seem chopped up.
other than that, i absolutely loooooove the subject matter!! i'm going to guess that in this universe, Mpreg exists and it's not just Sam and Dean who can get pregnant? Sam is soooooo having twins btw!
Squeeeee!! update soon!
other than that, i absolutely loooooove the subject matter!! i'm going to guess that in this universe, Mpreg exists and it's not just Sam and Dean who can get pregnant? Sam is soooooo having twins btw!
Squeeeee!! update soon!
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter. Priceless as Dean tries to broach the subject of Sam's er size.
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! that was really sad, not cry, but a pout, i feel your pain sort of way. poor Dean lost his child.
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, but the line "You're sleeping on the couch" never gets old, no matter where or how you hear it. love the story hope you plan to keep updating. I'll be watching.
peace
mel storm
peace
mel storm
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent... does Sammy maybe have more than one bun in the oven? Update soon!
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
kthx update plox
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February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol, if you've only done half a chapter it's usually best to wait until you've finished to post it ;) You're writing seems to have vastly improved though with this chapter and over the course of the story; the pacing is a bit slower and there's more detail to, there's also some emotional imagery and build-up for what's to come. I did think it was a bit short but if it's only half done then that's obviously why, lol. I look forward to more as you have a lot of potential and the beginnings of a good story.
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Their baby died! T-T WEHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
Sammy! Make Dean pregnant again dammit!
Just so you know, I really love this story. It's really original, first time I've read a story where the baby actually dies.
Sammy! Make Dean pregnant again dammit!
Just so you know, I really love this story. It's really original, first time I've read a story where the baby actually dies.