rate_review Reviews

GREAT STUFF .

I say continue!!

that was so hot hot hot!!!

I love this idea. It makes sense to me as a guy. Why else would he send a hot teenage girl cyborg to protect himself? He probobly had his choice of which he sent to the past and chose her for that very reason.

VERY nice! Wonderfully descriptive, excellent narrative, nice style.

Glad to see this story is continuing.

i´m so glad to see that i´m not the only one who has naughty thoughts about a certain smoking hot terminator...i mean, there´s got to be a reason why she´s designed as a female teenager of johns age and not as some overly muscled guy like most of the others ;-)

This is a hot story. Maybr John can explore more of her, like anal or more risque stuff.

Awesome start (if it do continue), I mean! I really liked it! Great idea and the character description was too, as well the smut, it was very nicly described and very hot! However, I do have one thing to say, concerning the sex scene; it was almost too long, the sexual act I mean, mostly due to the fact that is was his first time, and somehow I don't think that you'd last that long, especially if you're a guy, sorry about that, I don't mean to offened anyone!

Otherwhise it was pretty damn great and whatnot, lol! More so, it was all very well written, except for a few typos, but don't worry, it was nothing big!

Yes, I'd absolutely love it, if you'd continue, and if you do update soon...

good story, please continue

It might be smut but is well written. It's significantly better than most of the work on this site. I hope you continue this story. The level detail and the pacing were almost perfect.