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for Bitter Destruction

by CandyCaner

person luvsyafiction
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I missed this! I love all the drama. So many things are going on its hard to focus on just one. Although my favorite pairings are those that have Prue with Piper,Phoebe or Paige, Delilah has me intrigued. When I first started this I wasn't sure how I would like a hole new character. Why make a new one when there are already so many to build onto but in this her and Prue sort of pick up where the other leaves off. You did a great job with that. I'll try to stop rambling now lol. Great fic, please dont keep us waiting to long for the next chapter. Cant wait to read more!
person Shawndra
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! Nothing like a mothers love for her child.(hinted sarcasm) I loved the chapter. Keep up the awsome writting.

With much respect,



The Price of Madness
person Denver
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I love it but enough with the cliffhanger's already haha and I guess you are forgiven once again but pls don't make me wait forever for the next chap lol..........I looked up Ashley Greene and she is alot like how I would imagine Delilah but to be honest I never really pictured a face just other features about her that you described in the story.
person Shawndra
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn cliff hangers! That was a good chapter. Just curious about something, this isn't going to have the same ending or similer ending as when pheobe was bearing cole's child is it? Seer or someone similer takes her child with magic? well either way I suppose it will be good. Well, I look foward to another good chapter.

Sincerely,



The Prince of Madness
person Shawndra
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chapter. What a cliff hanger though. That was harsh. So many questions, how will the charmed ones react to the news, will she keep the baby...I guess I'll have to wait and see. Being able to implant questions into a readers mind is a great techique for an author, which it seems you are fully capiable of doing so.

Thanks for a great chapter,



The Prince of Madness
person Denver
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you are back with writing the story you are forgiven. The story just keeps getting better and better. I can't and see what Piper and Leo's reaction is going to be about the news. Boy what a homecoming.LOL.well enough with my rambling. Just please update soon
person Cadley18
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww you've really got me hooked on these stories. I hope that their will be another update soon ^^ I'm a sucker for the drama
person Shawndra
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How like prue to be so understanding. Now if that had probably been one of the other sisters....well you wouldn't get the same reaction thats for sure. This was a good intro for whats to come. Forshadowing is a good writting technique and you pulled it off. You've got my interest in this story, so please post another chapter to soon. You have definitly earned my seal of approval for this story.

With much respect,



The Prince of Madness
person Denver
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Again loved the chapter and thanks for the Prue/Delilah goodness.I can't wait to really see how this story plays out with the baby and all.Well try to update soon
person Sarah
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and where it is going I really hope that it ends with Prue/Delilah still together