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Im sooo excited for next chapter i can hardly wait. xD Ill just sit here and keep refreashing the page till you post it jk but seriously im in love with this story looking forward to next update. Also thanks for the quick updates <3 ^.^

A lot of angst and drama in this chapter, well more than usual. Although, this chapter, wasn't exactly "my cup of tea", it was still interesting. Not much for the gender-bending, or trans thing. You described the pregnancy very well. Overall, good chapter.

really enjoyed the latest chapter hope to read the next one soon. :D

Delilah and Prue are HOT!
Like always, this chapter was as great as all the others. I didn't want to jump right into how hot this chapter was without telling you how amazing you are, lol. All of the characters are perfect. The everyday stuff you have them doing, like eating lol, is great. Its not fake and cheesy. One of my favorite things is when you are writing about the little normal things they have going on. You write it perfect and I love it! LOL ok. On to how hot Prue and Delilah are! I know I'm going to sound crazy but OMG! They couldn't be any Hotter! Seriously! Your amazing, they are amazing! I cant even know what to say!!!

I love these fast updates!
I'm really nervous after this chapter! Well, maybe not as nervous as in shock, lol.
This was a crazy chapter. So much went on that I wasn't at all expecting. As soon as I thought the rest of Delilah's pregnancy would be somewhat normal something huge happens! I don't know what to think. I feel bad for Delilah and Prue, I feel bad for the baby. But at the same time I love that nothing has been predictable. Anything can and has happened, lol.
Its almost hard to remember that this isn't something the writers have come up with. Of course that's just another reason to love this! I really cant wait to read more! As always, I love this fic and you for writing it! I cant wait to see what happens next!

Interesting...piper almost kills an innocent, and the seer we all love to hate is out for a child. I'm humbly awaiting your next installment. This chapter brings in more questions, which keeps readers like myself interested.

I'm so happy you updated! I cant believe it took me this long to check back! The wait was totally worth it. I love that Delilah was with Piper when she got her new power. The Doctors appointment was almost worse for Piper than it was finding out the baby was 15 weeks instead of 6. Alright, so it wasn't worse but it was my favorite part for sure lol. I loved both chapters. I loved that Delilah was worried. I loved Piper being with her at the doctor. And Prue saying "Damn" about Piper missing Cole was great! lol. You are great! Cant wait to read more!

Is it weird that I like Delilah as much as Prue,Piper and Phoebe?

Hehehe...didn't know I reviewed...or read the same chapter twice. College can make you loose track of everything. On to the critiquing, I am personally looking forward to the conclusion now more than ever. You might have put a little more description into the setting(hospital in particular). I'm sure everyone knows what a hospital looks like, yet for better quality you might have at least described the room. Re(ason being it just seemed like standing in a blank room with nothing there but a bed, ultrasound machine, and story characters. The good points are obviously: the building story line, the regard to keep the original characters in same personality, and the constant throwing me off on what I'd expect the character to do next. Overall, good chapter.

Chapter was good. I look forward to a climatic ending... I hope to see more action scenes in the future.

With Much respect,



The Prince of Madness

Yeah! Another chapter. Yet, while keeping her personality the same you seemed to have conveyed Delilah's emotions, via pregnancy, very well. I look forward to seeing the seer again. Mainly because she seems to keep me on edge.