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loved the story hope you do decided to keep it going love your work
sincerly shade

This was beautiful! The best ending to anything EVER! lol seriously, this is one of the best endings I can remember. It couldn't have had a better ending. This chapter made the story ending worth it! LOVED it! Delilah being there at the end didn't hurt either, lol.
This really was a perfect ending. I loved Prue going to say goodbye. Letting us be in her head, seeing what she was thinking, PERFECT! I wasn't sure I liked the POV switching when I started this, but it ended up being one of my favorite things about it! lol, there were tears in my eyes the hole time. I would have started crying but I didn't want to miss anything. Sooooo great!

Of course I think you should do a sequel. How could anyone not want more Prue and Delilah! I wouldn't be totally upset if you wrote something new though, lol. I really did love this ending. If this is it for them I'm ok with it. lol I surprised my self with that. You are amazing!

That was beautiful love. I was hoping you would give it a good ending and not a sad one.

*Sheds a tear* That was an awesome ending. I would love to see a sequel, or I'd be just as happy with the current ending. I look forward to the sequel or future works.

Are long reviews part of the space problem? Just in case, i will try and keep this one short.

I don't know what to say! I hate when the chapter ends! So many questions, the chapters fly by! Another GREAT chapter! So much is going on, I cant wait to read more!

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I forgot how much I hate cliffhangers. Last two chapters were very interesting to say the least. So many questions were left unanswered, so I patiently await your next update. :)

This just keeps getting better! I go into every chapter now expecting greatness and you don't disappoint! All of the fanfics I have read have a point where the greatness stops. I'm not blaming the writer or anything like that, it just takes more to keep me interested. Your being amazing makes it worse! When I think you cant possibly come up with anything new or better you do! I don't know what I'm gonna do when this is over. Nothing is going to be worth reading! Im done rambling though lol. Your amazing! I know I say it all the time and its probably old and sounds creepy lol, I dont mean to. Those are just the only things I can think of to say to tell you how great this really is.

This was an all over the place chapter for me. I didn't know how to feel. I feel bad for Prue of course. Even though this is a situation where Delilah isn't purposely hurting her, it sucks that Prue is going through it. I know she has to know that. Right? I think so. Its just one of those problems that doesn't matter why its happening, just that it is.
As easy as it would normally be for me to be over a character who did what Delilah did. Especially when It happened to be to my favorite sister. I think its safe to say at this point I couldn't choose a favorite. Yea, It sucks that Prue Saw what she saw, that she is hurt, that Delilah is doing what she is doing. I just dont feel as bad for her as I do for Delilah. Everything bad that ever could happen has happened. As soon as Delilah starts to find a little happiness in the baby mess she cant keep her pants up. She just cant catch a break. With all the depressing things that happened this chapter It was still sort of hot. Prue was a mess and all Delilah could think about was how much she wanted to get it on with her. Or anything that would touch her for that matter, lol. Its amazing how fast everything can change from one chapter to the next!
I Loved this chapter! It was one of my 14 most favorite chapters, lol. You are AMAZING!

I LOVE THESE FAST UPDATES! You have updated twice since checked last! I thought for awhile that you had given up writing it. You have no idea how glad I am that you didn't!
I have no idea what will happen next! I really don't know what to say!!! I love that Delilah and Cole are friends. I love how you have built up there friendship! I loved how phoebe got her premonition! A great way to find out something horrible. There is no dragging out suspense with you! Waking up with the intention of trying to fix a relationship, to caged in the underworld! All in one chapter! I am speechless! You are lucky you are so great or I might be mad at where you ended! lol. I cant wait to read what's next! I hate the chapter ending as much as I love the updates! You really do keep getting better! Loved this chapter, cant wait for you to update!!!

okay couple things 1 yep i am female :D 2 im happy you lied yay more chapters looking forward to them as always. i only wish i would have found this story sooner i stubbled onto this one not long ago and actually read sweet sudction and this one all in one night xD Delilah is a great character and her paired with (in my opinion) one of the hottest charmed sister simply fantastic. Cant wait till next chapter and again much thanks for fast updates

hehehe...this is really building up. Although, I should have said this sooner. I am most grateful for the quick updates. Everything is getting quite emotional, yet it seems really natural. Add together a pregnant demon, and an emotional witch and things can get really interesting. I see a climax building.

Patiently waiting for you next update,



The Prince of Madness