rate_review Reviews

This story is absolutely delicious.So sinful and tempting and oh so good..I seriously loved it.How about you finish it like..now?I sooo want more of these so hot and sexy scenes between our most loved angel and half-demon.Please?Pretty please?*bat eyelashes*Anyway,pretty great work.Write more on this soon!!! :D

TerrahFry please email me at standby75@yahoo.com when you decide to update again, okay. And also, I'm really upset that at all of the reviews that you received ONLY two of the reviews aren't from me. Anyways, that's their lost then.

Signed,
BlackSheepProduction aka Nightmare

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Why? Why you do it TerrahFry?!? I was happy dead, and plus couldn't you bring me back to life after Christmas. I mean really I could have gone without the kisses and huggs that could last a life-time for just one year. If you haven't notest I have a HUGE family made up of first and second cousins(My family breeds like rabbits).


Now time for the real review!

Cole won! Leo Lost! Cole1/Leo0 Oh, and i'm with Leo and Cole do the Elders ever sleep, because that would be just creepy if all they do is just sit around and watch people go at it. If that's true i'm staying in my clothes full time baby.


Signed fully clothe,
BlackSheepProduction

Cole is FREE! I'm going to party now.

I'M SOOOO BORED! UPDATE FOR ME PLEASE BEFORE I LOSE MY MIND! And then who would read your story and review. I won't, because I'll be dead sitting at the computer with a sign saying in BIG LETTERS that it's your fault for not updating and that update could of saved my poor little life.


Signed a corpse sitting at the computer,
BlackSheepProduction

I just have one thing to say, where the hell was I when chapters six and seven were posted up. Honestly, where the hell was I? Okay, now that I got that out of my system it’s time for the real review.



Chapter Six:

I really, and I mean I REALLY wanted to kill Leo for a minute in this chapter because he made Cole frown. However, I forgave Leo because of this one sentence: The Whitelighter could feel the demon's hardness poking his derriere, almost begging for entry into the forbidden. Come on! Almost begging for entry into the forbidden, now every time I think of something perverted ((oh and by the way I am a girl)) that one little sentence is going to be stuck in my head. God, you are a cruel, cruel, cruel person. I like it ‘winks’. I know chapter seven is up and I know I’m going to be in agony but, I’m going to wait and read it in the morning ‘looks away from the computer and frowns’. Goodbye ‘runs out of the room and cries’.



Signed in agony,
BlackSheepProduction

good,have more detailed sex scenes.maybe include jason and dan

Absolutely love this story!!!!!!!!! Please continue PLEASE!!!

I feel really bad for Cole 'cries' I hope every thing works out for him.




Signed,
BlackSheepProduction

I love the whole Cole and Leo thing. It was so...I don't know, words can't describe it. Well anyways thank you for the lovely chapters that you uploaded and I can not wait for the next delicious sexy chapters that will follow. And one more thing, I can't believe that I am the first one to rate and wright a review for this story. I mean COME ON! This story is the best one on here.





Love and signed,
BlackSheepProduction

PS. Upload as soon as you can.

PSS. And HAPPY EARLY THANKSGIVING TOO.