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by mneiai

schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It really is a bit spooky they got both that dark...But I liked it. Apart from that I just wanted to say that why your story is formated as it is, is not at all comprehensible, since there really is enough space. Especially since whatever you used (html?) is partly showing in between the text which makes reading harder and shows that either the site doesn't allow it or that you made mistakes and haven't ever looked at this story since you posteed it, which is sad.