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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are doing a great job with this story. The sex scenes with Elle and Claire are really hot and the story is over all fun to read. You do a good job of getting into what both characters are thinking. It will be interesting to see how things go now with Claire seeming to want to keep things secret and how other characters will react.
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April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story gets better and better the relationship between elle and claire is both sweet sassy and complicated, its good to see an s@m story where the sadist isn't so in control that it becomes boring, if the masichist is too weak it sometimes makes her uninteresting, love this story
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April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really love this series MTL. I hope you continue writing more of it as the thought of sexy little Claire Bennett and Elle Bishop fucking is super hot.
Again, very well written and keep up the good work!
Again, very well written and keep up the good work!
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great story, i love the way you right these characters especially elle who is as unsure as she is dominant, and clare is great you can really feel the 'electricity between these two keep it up, oh and a little request could you bring diapers into this, or possibly animal play if nnot never mind keep up the good work
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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. You are really good. I only wish I could write one fiftieth as well as you do.
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and into the characters. I can see Elle enjoying her sexually dominating Claire.
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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving the new chapter. It's a really sexy story, I'm glad you're continuing it.
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it. A great fan of Elle/Claire. And this story just sends them around the bend. Claire has a thing for pain, Elle's a sadist. It couldn't have worked out better if it actually happened on the show. Can't wait to read more.
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY u updated ....please let there be toys in the next chapter
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG please tell me you will write more elle/claire fics this was fucking hot ...but this time claire can be in controll of elle