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March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Good descriptions and pace. Might have needed just a little more set-up, but that's just me. Now, where's the rest?
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well written and decisively sexy. Can't wait for it to continue. Good writing!
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story you've got here so far, I really like it! The plot seems to be pretty good and the character portrayal's pretty great as well. More so Riley is all right in this one, I guess, while Cameron is awesome, hehe! (After all, she's one of my favourite characters, along with John)!
The fic is also quite well written, which is a big plus (well, for me at least), and the smut was actually very good, cosidering it was one of your earlier attempts!
Well done! Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...
The fic is also quite well written, which is a big plus (well, for me at least), and the smut was actually very good, cosidering it was one of your earlier attempts!
Well done! Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far.
I'm interested to see what you do with Riley after the reveal in episode 10.
I'm interested to see what you do with Riley after the reveal in episode 10.
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey great start to hopefully a long series
I love this show and the way they seem to building some tension between John and Cam... I can't wait to see what you do with it.
keep it up!
I love this show and the way they seem to building some tension between John and Cam... I can't wait to see what you do with it.
keep it up!
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
C'mon please write another chapter soon. I want to see John finish himself up with Riley and maybe get some from Cameron too.
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE it!!
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.