rate_review Reviews

They're getting down to the nitty gritty here. All the deep pent up stuff that needs to be talked about. I love it. (smile) It's great to see them talk through things like this. Open and even if a little unsure they still talked and were able to clear things up. Good for them. I'm just crossing my fingers that things work out for them in the end.

Well...shit. Do they always have to be found out? (sigh) But seriously...if they were that loud I'm not sure I'dbe willing to blame them for outing themselves except for the fact that the whole tribe will want to kill them now. I just hope Xena, hell either of them has a plan now.

You tell her Eve. (lol) Sorry having Eve scream at Xena about not being able to not take what she has wanted for years was amusing. Mostly cause that's how I would have viewed Xena and Gabs getting together. (snicker) So...(shrug) I'm hoping that this'll turn out alright. With Marga there to help defend them, which I hope she does, and Xena there to get them out if it goes bad, well I hope it turns out alright whatever way it ends.

=====When Eve spoke, it was quiet, “Do you love me?”
It was a variation of the question she always used to ask me, and I smiled as I looked up at her and kissed her softly on the lips.
“Yes,” I answered, truthfully.=======

That sums up my love of this story. Thank you for writing and sharing this story. IT was wonderful. Your writing is wonderfully descriptive, emotional and personal. All the qualities of a wonderful story. God not to mention the drama! Ugh...(wink)

I'm glad that the council was swayed and that Eve is going to stay with Varia. I'm glad that even though the tribe doesn't fully understand it they're giving them a try. And man am I so thankful that Xena caught that dagger. I held my breath while reading how Varia tried to grab it but her binds kept her from getting it.

I hope you'll continue to write for this couple. Maybe even a sequel to this story? Please?

This is a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it tremendiously. Come back with more whenever you can. Please and thank you.

InBetweens

I must admit, when it comes to my fanfics I'm more of a PWP fan. I usually don't read anything more than a chapter or two simply because most of the writing is awful. However, I've read the majority of your works because - excellent sex scenes beside the point ;) - I think you have a great knack for word choice and sentence structure, and you really know the characters and write them well. I'd love to see you do some original stories. You could be the next Sarah Waters - who knows! Keep up the good work.

~ A

I LOVED THIS STORY!!! you've got some talent. please keep writing Varia/Eve(Livia) stories. They're awesome!! and really hard to find. you write very well. Nice Job!