rate_review Reviews

Thanks for the reviews you three.

Kira, I hope this fic does stand out amongst other Collie fics like you've said!

Vixen, I'm flattered that you've read my fic twice, and hope you enjoy the latest chapter as much as the previous ones!

I appreciate what you're saying Storm, but my fic is not intended for anyone under the age of 17, and even if I weren't writing smut, I do not cater to the Harry Potter generation. Still I do see your point, but I'm all too aware that my writing style and use of language is not for everyone...although that is sort of my point as a writer...thinking man's smut! Hehehe...

Thanks again all, really appreciate the comments!

I have to say, I enjoy the angst factor, the spats and varied tools you've used to keep people wanting more. The only area where I feel it might be served better is the overuse of extreme vocabulary. Though many adults may be capable rather easily of determining the meaning of things from the wording, there are those no matter what their age that simply don't do well with concentrating when an overuse of complicated words is employed. I would suggest toning down some of those words just a bit because some readers may stop reading when they have to trip over words.

I have read this story twice. I am hoping you are going to get to the other chapter I will be waiting and watching out for them .hope, hope,. it is so good as of yet and i know iw will be even hotter . oxoxoxox

Hey Love This Story Not To Many Great Collie Fics Out There But This Is One Great Work.