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That was great. LoL. Their grandpa's grave. I would drink Sammy's blood too. Rawr.

I kind of guessed it was Castiel though. Dirty little angel. Hehe.

I loved it! I love who the grave belong to and who was watching them! It was great!

that was awesome but i think you used "solidly" too much. a synonym could be better.
"He was really his brother’s whore to let him do this to him he thought." that part probably would be better if you had put it in the direct form like 'I'm really my brother's whore to let him to this to me' he thought
"Didn’t mean too, but it is a strange twist of fate" in this case it should be 'to' not 'too'
finally, in the end we figure out that Castiel is the one who has been watching them (which is hot as fuck might i say) but hes an angel and thus has no sexual desire so him jacking off doesnt make sence.
anyway, ive ranted enough, great read

loved it!! castiel makes three hot guys!! one nitpick to point out if i may....their grandfather's name is samuel campbell (their mom's side) not winchester....sorry but thought you might want to know. great story. love submissive sam.

At first I thought the twist would be something like he was in hell watching what could/would be, lol, but I love your twist a lot better! It was pretty amusing and unexpected. Anyways it was a great piece of work, you write really well and it was quite interesting. Look forward to more of your works in future.