rate_review Reviews

I think we've all dreamed on being on the receiving end of Dean's pick up lines. There are several things i like about this one shot. I like that it's not very deep, but still the Supernatural character stays true to character. I like that the OC is not some super hot chick nor is she some wallflower - she's a regular girl, regular attractive with normal reservations about having a one night stand with a stranger - no deep rooted issues. I liked the use of the Devil/Angel characters to illustrate to her feelings - refreshing and funny and I think often how many of us feel. And the first scene where Dean is "convincing" her to let him stay? Totally hot. Well written (all of it not just that scene) - i think even if the reader wasn't in the mood for a sexy scene that by the time Dean's phone rings the reader will be just as worked up as the characters and just as disappointed - i know i was! it was like - damn! When Dean returns the sex is still well written and hot, but not as much as in that opener. And again,i feel the entire thing is well written. Thanks for writing and posting.

Rather sweet and romantic - which I like! Nicely written,I like the believablness of her not being one to do a ONS and how Dean "convinces" her to take a chance. The angel and devil on her shoulder was cute. Nicely written.

Enjoyed this very much. I liked how to wrote from the different character's perspectives.

It was Great!!

I love this story! Clearly someone who appreciates Dean as much as I do. I especially liked the little shoulder angel/devil commentary throughout.

This is easily in my top 3 favorite dean stories!! terrific writing. sexy and sweet at the same time

thanks for that. You are a very talented writer. Bloody hell that was very erotic!

Wow i really loved this it was incredible! i've read all your other Supernatural stories and their dynamite.

very interesting. first story i've read here. i like it.