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April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A good story, one small note: It's GD (Global Dynamics) not DG (Dorothy Gail from Oz). It's all over your second chapter.
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
next chapter please
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would make it more detailed, but I just don't have the time. I'm trying my best to just get the ideas down and let the readers' imaginations do the rest.
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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I enjoyed it.
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept but the scenes could do with a little more detail.