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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So awesome! I do hope Elliot still has a little fight left and/or makes mistakes...
I've said this before, but again, it's amazing the way you write the dialogue for the characters. I hope there's more soon!
I've said this before, but again, it's amazing the way you write the dialogue for the characters. I hope there's more soon!
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, really well thought out and structured, I think you capture the characters excellently, and not to mention really hot! One of the best adult fan fictions I have ever read. Please keep updating!
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are doing a GREAT JOB. In so many fan fics the authors don't make their characters talk or act like the real ones. Throughout the entire three chapters, every sentence they said, every action, I could see plain as day in my head. PLEASE keep writing!! I would love to see what Jordan does next. . . more spanking, whipping, maybe some good restraints and tickle and more punishment.
Again, amazing work. It is a great read.
Again, amazing work. It is a great read.
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Simply brilliant. Keep up the good work.
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sexy update, fun story! But please don't stop updating the other stories for this one - I simply like your other stories too much... ;-)
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, interesting pairing. Well done!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I fucking love you.
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it