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I know it's old, but I had to say that this is not only the best Jordan/Elliot Elliot/Other fic I've read, but one of the best D/s fics I've read in a long long time. I just discovered this story but I'm sure I'm going to be reading it many many times.

reread this a second time, fantastic love some more

Adding Denise and/or (preferably and) Lucy is a MUST

still love this, cant wait for next chapter

this is great, i love this pairing, jordan is a great dom, and elliot a great suband the relationship between the two has been excelently handled, most writers on here knock the fight out of there subs too soon, this makes it much more interesting then dull sex scene after sex scene, when you brought in carla i admit i was worried usually these strys on this site just become lets make every character a dom and have another sex scene and i lose interest with this wow, it has actually brought in a new dynamic and you cant help feeling that at the moment elliot would be happier with carla, could this actually be a triangle and actually a story development, i do hope so keep up the good work

You are absolutely amazing! Your writing is absolutely top notch and I can literally feel every emotion depicted in your story! I'm current on chapter three and whe I read Elliot exclaiming to dr cox about sex with Jordon my heart stopped. For a moment I literally felt the depictions of the characters coming alive in my mind as if it was actually the tv show. I just had to tell you asap how much I absolutely adore your work. I'm not sure if this story is done but I hope it is, and if not I hope you finish it! Your biggest fan, K.

I really love this story. I hope you update soon. One thing, though (just for consideration). If someone is really fucked up and enjoying it, they would be panting, crying, moaning, and naturally, they can't easily speak. So you might want to make the people (especially Elliot) have a difficulty in talking during the naughty sex I enjoy so much. Update soon! I just discover your works and the kinkiness is making me drool for more.

So hot! Love the domination, the hints into Elliott's psyche. Delicious. Hoping that Jordan doesn't just discard her though..

Oh my god! I can't believe there's more chapters to this! The first alone fit so much domination and unbelievable mind fuckery that I couldn't conceive that this story could be sexually expanded. I'm thrilled to be wrong. Great job capturing the voices of Elliot and Jordan and lovely little tidbits of nasty ass description ("fuck pad" particularly). Can't wait to read more!

Awesome read! Are we ever going to get an update? I loved your that 70's show story as well!