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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You can't end it! There's so much more to explore between those two. Blair has yet to admit she needs Chuck, that her itch won't go away unless she's with Chuck.
This chapter was smoking hot! Even if you end this one... don't stop writing CB, you're great at it.
This chapter was smoking hot! Even if you end this one... don't stop writing CB, you're great at it.
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Smoking, smoking, smoking hot! Please continue, if not this fic, another B/C. Loved the power plays, and the fact that Chuck never quite gains complete dominance.
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. You just can't end it, not yet. Must I beg?
There is still so much sexual ground to be explored by these two. You have them down really well, and it's all very hot. So you must keep going.
There is still so much sexual ground to be explored by these two. You have them down really well, and it's all very hot. So you must keep going.
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omigod!!! so sexy, please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Firstly I gotta say.....THAT WAS SO FREAKIN HOT!! I've just finished reading the 1st chapter and I wish I had time to read the next chapter, but I'll have to wait for tomorrow.
Helena recommended this fic to me, she told me you are one of the best fanfic writers and I tell ya, she is totally right!!
Can't wait to read more tomorrow :)
Helena recommended this fic to me, she told me you are one of the best fanfic writers and I tell ya, she is totally right!!
Can't wait to read more tomorrow :)
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story! I love how Blair is completely drawn to Chuck. He just knows everyway to turn her on. I can't wait till he teaches her how erotic other ways of sex can be (ie, anal, oral, etc). Very sexy story and I can't wait to read more!!!
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hotter than youŕe first fic!
and i saw a ¨to be continued¨ phrase down there..
more chappies to come?
oh yeah.. ;p
and i saw a ¨to be continued¨ phrase down there..
more chappies to come?
oh yeah.. ;p
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think this is amazing. I think it was erotica but not trashy.
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories. You have Chuck and Blair down perfectly -- how he is so demanding, and she hates him in the moment, but he still kisses her hair as she rests her head on his shoulder. It is about sex -- but not only sex for them. Of course, neither has yet to realize this. Since you ask for feedback -- the only thing that stood out to me in chapter 3 was chuck dressed in jeans and a t-shirt. Seems like the details would go more like she undid the buckle of his armani belt ... he slipped off his prada shoes .... etc. And supposedly Chuck and Blair met in pre-school ... so it would be creepy if he thought she had blow job lips at age 3 ...although with Chuck, it is possible. Maybe he wanted her to suck his cock since 6th grade .. after he fucked georgina. Please keep writing. I really do love your stories.
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!
Every sex scene you write is nothing short of perfect and amazing.
I check in everyday to see if you've updated and I'm so happy when I see you did... really, love this story and I'm sure you'll keep up the good work.
Update ASAP please. This story makes my day.
Every sex scene you write is nothing short of perfect and amazing.
I check in everyday to see if you've updated and I'm so happy when I see you did... really, love this story and I'm sure you'll keep up the good work.
Update ASAP please. This story makes my day.