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for We Don't Die

by JetpackAngel

person Eni
schedule December 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hope you will update this story in the future, it is good. loved it.
person Eni
schedule December 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
just found your story today, and till now I liked it a lot. even this chapter. Nice seeing the mom of Don and Ricky finally realizing the "overreacted".
person Dreamer22
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story so far and am so glad i found it again and can't wait to read more!!!
person Dreamer22
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I honestly don't know why you didn't get any reviews on this chapter but I really liked it. I love the look at little Donnie growing up and his friendship with Don Sr. maybe people just wanted more sex scenes lol ;-D anyway well done!!
person Gilt
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the second of your flashback chapters, and I don't know what's up with the people on livejournal, but I thought it was good. I like how you're delving into Mac's past and it feels like you're trying to show how he decided to act the way he does...or something. I just love the story in general. I was more than ecstatic when I saw that you had posted more chapters. Keep them coming!
person Gilt
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE!! Okay, I know I've already reviewed tonight, but that was a few chapters ago. I just finished reading the rest of them and have loved every minute of it! I will admit, I am not the biggest fan of Horatio Caine, probably because I am not fond of the actor that portrays him, but I absolutely love the way you've worked him into the story! Please tell me this isn't done! Please! I will beg for more if I have to, and I beg really well. Good work!
person B
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wanna say that I've spent the last 24 hours
reading through all of your fics, and I am in love.
You are a very talented author, and I really enjoy
reading you work.

As far as We Don't Die goes, I gotta say I really
like the flashbacks. Granted, I kinda wish you'd
get back to Danny and Mac fucking a bit more, but
I do enjoy the back stories.

Eagerly waiting,
B.
person Goldentrinkit
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love all the knowledge you use behind the whole vampire thing. You are not just one of those people who make vampires into all those myths, legends and such you give scientific reasoning and blend fact with fiction beautifully.

Please do continue.
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That was somethin' else! Wow! I certainly hope you keep writing, 'cause this was excellent! Good job! I love how much detail there was, the different strains! How Mac met Don, just: Wow. I'm not even going to go to the last chapter or my brain'll melt again!

I loved it! -Shayne
person Carlo
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey now!!! This story ain't half bad. I love it!!! It's hot in that fifth chapter, but when sex ain't happening, it's kinda nice and feel-goody. Hope there's more. Heck, u might even be able to post this on fanfiction.net under the Mac/Danny pairing. 10/10 Although I wonder how it'll end I hope it ends on a good note.