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for Essentials of Happiness

by gestaltrose

person Anon
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! Is this where they got the idea for 4x18??

Great story!

I wish 4x18 was a little bit more like this though...
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Very creative idea; I haven't seen anyone use Heinlein's world as myth theory in a fic before and I like it very much. One thing though; you probably need to add a real person slash type disclaimer on to this story too.
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty amazing story; it's one of the most original fanfictions I've ever read, and it's incredibly well written too, lol, you almost seem like a proffesional writer. What scares me though is just yesterday I was talking to a friend about a similar concept, about how fictional characters could be real, lol, then today I read this, it's a scary coincedence! Anyway, if you ever write more I'd love to read it, again this was a fantastic piece of work!
person Mangacat
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MWAHahahahahaa... hilarious!! The first scene with the set question and all that jazz.. I just laughed my ass off about the antics of those two.. four... whatever. The Myth-theory is also quite interesting; I definitely like it! and the inner dialogue!! To die for...
Cat