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for Girls just want to have fun...

by PyroManiac666FU

person Anonymous
schedule July 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

It was great I almost came while reading it, but I want that feeling to last through another story or two. Well keep up the good work, and I promise to cum next time, OKay?

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schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not as detailed as i had hoped, but it still was a good turn on! NEXT CHAPTER! NEXT CHAPTER!
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
continue the story. where are the toys?
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please write a second chapter
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story wow just WOW great job really great.
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is good. Straight to the point. can't wait for the next one.
person Bryan
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Very hot!!
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story definitely has potential. I would also love to see a second chapter.
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its not bad, i personally prefer a little build up to it though, also it seems just a little fast paced, not by too much though. Other then that its a good story and i'd love to see more
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was Hot! I would looooove to read a second chapter.