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for Down the Rabbit hole

by makoeyedsoldier

person Wendy
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story and I hope you update it soon. I always knew he could be the romantic type, but this goes beyond anything I thought possible. So sweet and perfect.

Wendy
person The Black Adder
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Great, keep up the good work and please continue
person The Black Adder
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, seems Endofthethoughtprocess and I agree :-)
person Endofthethoughtprocess
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! What a great story! Keep up the good work!!
person Lexi
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story so much! You ever think about putting it on fanfiction(dot)net? I'm not sure if it's there or not, but it might get more attention and you'll get more reviews if it's put there. It's just a suggestion :)
person Aurora
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I just recently found this story and I loved every chapter of it. I'm really hoping that it doesn't just stop right there... I hope that there is more coming up that will be just as good! This is amazing, please keep going!
person chocoman
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i just stumbled upon your story and i gotta say that i am in love with it. looking forward to your next update. you know there really aren't enough Huddy stories here for my liking so keep up the good fight................ with your keyboard??? anyways please keep going
person sodapop0006
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is super-cute! I am anxious about House and Wilson, though... they really do make such great friends that it would be really sad if they couldn't get past this. You're very good with conversations and moving the characters smoothly within scenes. It might help, however, if you used quotation marks for the speakers, just to limit any confusion.

Can't wait to read more!
person Natal
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, i'm only gonna say this once.

'Speech marks'

and it's nice to know that the entirety of season four can be boiled down to 'daddy issues'. What a novel concept.

Looking forward to the next chapter, it seems to be the literary eqcuivelant of an outer body experience.