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for Moving Violation

by SpecialFX

person Anon
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fabulous. only a few moments where the word choice was a tad blunt, but overall you were eloquent.
person kaesaku
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
my fave couple..
that was hot.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* OMG, this is incredible hot! The actual scene was hot enough (okay, maybe not enough, but as far as TV is concerned, it was), but the details of what happened after the camera fades is so good!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, chapter two was definitely hot and *SQUEAL*

I actually really love how he said sorry before breaking her barrier.

And then she asked if he came! aw! how cute.

ROUND TWO! Love the switch of positions.

After it was over..oh, reality came sinking in. ECK! *bites lip*
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I -love- you for writing this story. Absolutely -adore- you. I didn't expect anyone to write a Gossip Girl fanfic and not this well to add to the experience. You showed how, deep down, Chuck really cared for Blair. And even though it started off as a drunken fling for Ms. Waldorf, it ended as a memorable experience. This is the sort of ship i live for. They are my two favorite characters and now you've inspired me to write one of my own.
person Maliksgirl
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! Very sexy and quite like I had imagined it must have been like X_X' all the best!!!!
person Lola
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this, really hot! And I like the details, both physical and emotional...or at least their thoughts were interspersed with what is happening.

"Ready for round two?"

That was wicked especially when Chuck let Blair be on top and let her set the pace.

I really really hope you write more smut soon! Maybe a new position or someplace unusual. I'd love to see Chuck coax Blair out of her shell; and Blair let go of her inhibitions and let Chuck see another side of her (her sexuality and all).