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for The Secret

by Keen

person Zrina
schedule May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you have captured the essence of dexter's character. He is very believable in this. The social awkwardness, the emotional distance and yet not so distant, the mental dialogue; you have done a really excellent job. I also like that you aren't turning this into some sexual romp like happens to so many other fanfics. And if it does eventually lead to a relationship, I have absolute faith that you will make it happen naturally and it will flow with the story.

Very well done! I am looking forward to reading more!!
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OoO TALK ABOUT CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Evil evil... *goes and checks ff to see if it's there* Eeeeh? only up to chapter 3? weird.

Anyway. Looking forward to more! X|
person maloanne
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this very much,I hope there is more soon.
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person Harboe
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy to see a new update!
Honestly, I think the current chapter has really been the best of them.
As if you've found just the right formulations now. I hope you'll keep writing; it helps get my own creative juices flowing.
=)
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful read. You've captured the essence of the characters. Especially Dexter's narration.

Hopefully the wait isn't too long.