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for Jealous Guy

by finaldecember

schedule November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's incredibly interesting how you managed to depict both Owen's observational ability and his oblivious state. I thought this was a great start for a much longer story, but it does stand on its own well enough. Should you ever consider continuing the tale, I would be interested to see where you go with it.

Thank you for sharing!