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by jantolover

person Dawn
schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! THIS IS SO AWESOME! You simply must continue it. I can't believe someone hasn't thought of something like this before.
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is a really great story :D I really hope you continue this!
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see a new part! I hope you continue!
person emz
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
fantastic story hope to see more.maybe with plot devlopment?
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah how you tease us ^_^
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this!
I hope you continue!
I'm anxious to know what's going to happen next XD
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope your muse returns soon!
I very rarely hold my breath while reading!
Very well done.
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG !!! i love it! i have been waiting for aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaages for someone to write a fic like this!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE post more soon! please!!
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU JUST DID THAT!!!! you must continue this PRONTO!!! >:( or i shall be VERY CROSS!!!! *shakes fist*
person Jerlayne
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved this story and its unique perspective. please continue and update soon!