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That was hot! I love hurt!Sylar, especially when it's with Peter. Damn, Peter was evil! But I love evil!Peter too, because, well, I'm just sick like that, I guess. Great fic, I hope you write more on these two, as I will surely read. ^_^

Hey love love love the stories and the crossover w/ heroes and power rangers are my fav, i always did think all sylar needed was some love lol. Are you a hereos fan as well because some new info just came out that Sylar doens't eat people's brains, it was ina commercial or something. no criticism or anything just wanted to inform a good writer. I really hope you write more

Hmmm... okay. I'll be honest. If you ever write another story, please make sure you have it beta read before you post it anywhere! The way you handled (or rather didn't handle) the English language in this prevented me from enjoying what otherwise could have been a good story.

I don't usually leave such discouraging reviews, but this time I couldn't help but make an exception. I think you have potential as a writer. Just learn to apply proper spelling, grammar and punctuation, and people might actually enjoy what you write.