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I think this could be very good, but there are so many spelling and punctuation errors that they kept taking me out of the story.

Very good, although you messed up a little in the details. I think after daisy joins the group George ends up sexing this rich preppy boy. And mason doesn't wear tightey whiteys he wears cotton briefs with the British flag on the ass. ;p and crap loads of holes in them as well. Uhm also, it needs to be spell checked because there are a lot of miss spelled words in this. Other then that, i like it even though their voices come off as mechanical, but thank you so much for doing this you must be a very nice person to respond to my challenge Keep up the good work.