rate_review Reviews

omg this is awesome! I can't describe how much happy i am that it is not an one shot. Beautiful writing as always. I m a little confused on why Clark called himself Clark and not Kal, however i take it that it was your choice. Anywho, very hot story, can't wait for the update.

I loved it! HOT HOT HOT!

I like it so far very hot

I love your story, they are both horny yet immature, horny kids. But seriously, as I brought that already, you have the gift of catching the right rhythm of the story, keeping th e right tempo, like everything a little bit fast forward, as the reader was on their place, hm... like being slightly aroused, maybe? Or maybe just falling in love? Staring at the ither person with eyes wide open? Love it, update soon.