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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is grate, you should write a sequel!
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hane't read it for a while, the last two chapters even better than the previous ones. The ending was just perfect. Bravo!
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved your story. It was amazing. Totally hot. Awesome job
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg this was so good, i m really sad it ended! Great ending by the way and great chapter overall, i am sooooooooo glad someone at last dared to go by the hurting route and make it actually believable, cause almost everyone else , when it comes to Clois sex, writes as bit too soft, and considering Clark's power and the fact that when he is on Red K he has no inhibitions, it wouldn't be believable if written the common way.
I would really love to read more Clois stories from you whenever you have the inspiration. Your writing is different and stands out.
I would really love to read more Clois stories from you whenever you have the inspiration. Your writing is different and stands out.
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please continue.
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww i loved this chapter so much! It was both intense and sweet. Kal seems to be a bit calmer than usual around her. I am waiting to see if he will unleash at some point his more arrogant side, infuriating her lol great writing as always.
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great hot chapter, i liked the references to Lois' past. Now some Kalois action, please? :)
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This second chapter was just superb! I m in awe by your skills in writing smut, cause you manage to write it with some meaning you know? Not just sex scenes the one after the other, there is some depth there , in the dialogs and characters. Awesome chapter, can't wait for more.
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far! Please update soon
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS REALLY HOT