rate_review Reviews

ah that was great. I loved Chloe's explanation of being gay to Lana. Tears in my eyes from laughing so hard! And also Chloe's "I am in the presence of a god and i have no offering".
I love the words and writing style you use when they're kids and in this. I kinda (and i really hope that i'm not about to offend you) get a childish feel to it? Like your reading a story to a kid and over exaggerating things.
And now back to work! I want more Clarky and Zaky!!! XD

Awww, cute. Loved it. Can't wait to see where you go with it next. 'Purr

I like it you have a way with words. I'm definitely going to read more of this story.

i loved these two new chapters. i keep getting this picture in my head of zak dancing on the water. veery pretty.
Clark is so cute as a kid. I can't wait for more.
I've just recently started reading your stories. I can't remember if i reviewed them or not and i just had to say that I love all your stories. they're very interesting...and hot! the original characters or even the ones from other tv shows fit in so well. Please continue writing plenty!

That was a really sweet chapter! I loved the hide and seek part!

SuperHOT! Please post more soon! Can't wait for the next chapter!