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Thanks for the kind review on Kal El. I got the idea from my husband cousin April , who likes to big choke during sex. She told me it was a very erotic feeling ,to have your partner have that much rein over you . I thought I was seriously kinky , because I like my hair pulled ,and breast played with roughly. My husband would probably look at me like i was crazy if I said Hon will you choke me during sex. I can wait until the next chapter of this story.

Lady Lane did a great job with the trailer, didn't she?
She's the real mind reader, I asked to include some scenes and she picked up the idea and made the trailer in an hour.
I just re-read the story, hm I didn't remember it was so harsh, maybe a little bit OC, but this is Red K Clark and MAd Dog LAne as for now. So it will calm down eventually.
Well I guess it needs an update now.
Due to lots of work it is on hiatus now, but that it I will definitely continue it, when I find the time.

I saw the trailer youtube It was smoking hot

Pretty darn good ,some southern slang for you .You've got me hook, line ,and sinker .Keep letting the words flow.

Thank you, I aprreciate.
The whole part was written last night, though the story keeps going through my head quite lot, ijust sit and write, no bete reader, no changes, except the spelling ones I'm able to catch myself. So the words do literally flow. Some people read it already and told me they are slightly confused, we'll the story was thought as they should be as confused as Lois is herself, being not a native speaker doesn't help me either. But I'm glad you caught the so-called dark and steamy attitude towards the story. Lol, it's just a story, not Shakespeare. Put some Breaking Benjamin or Linkin' Park or my last night's discovery - Colors by Crossfade and enjoy. For me it's mainly about the atmosphere. :-)

Why thank you, I love your Clois. They should just go and introduce them as a couple on the show... or start to like eachother.

Oh, forgot to add that Kara Zor-El? has been updated with the first chapter after the prologue.. though it's sexless.... except for a Kryptonian girl ;)

Its four 0'clock here in Memphis Tn , and I just finish reading the first chapter of your story. Pretty good for it to be your first English fanfic. I like it. I think you should add more chapters.

Thank you :-)

It's your opinion I valued most :-).

It's extremely hard to write anything if you are not a native speaker, you don't learn such vocabulary in school after all. It's not only the vocabulary, but also the style that matters, especially in the smut scenes. I've no idea how will I write an oral sex, we'll see :-). And the plot should match the characters, so it's not like that you are the only one who shall be pleased with that.

More chapters will came on Sunday, after my first attorney exam. This story is planned to be the long one, with plot, and not very dirty, cause it's being published on the regular Clois forum. But I'm tempting myself to write something totally just for me and post it here. A SV Alien vs. Predator one shot crossover :-). This will be the real fun.

This is a great fanfic! And extra kudos for trying to make a fic in another language! Also I'd like to thank you for reviewing my Kara Zor-El fanfic. Expect an update soon! I hope you're thinking of adding chapters to this brilliant fanfic!